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war-spawn
circa 2006

Grimm Cropes @war-spawn

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All the proof you need. lmao

Posted by war-spawn - November 1st, 2007


So, BN thinks I'm fake now. Cuz I made a punch line outta him. Boo-fucking-hoo. We all know he has no flow, and my punchline was, 'I ain't Broken Needle, my flow stay on point.' So he got all emotional, and says: "shut ya mouth so that shit can heal up properly son, wouldn't be talkin shit right now cuz u can barely talk, u in denial son, iz Game Over and u ran out of quaters to continue so shut ya mouth and quit" Lmao, he forgot that I have his heart in my pocket. I told him what it takes to have flow, yet his dumb ass refuses to listen. Enjoy the long read.

LyricalVisionary (11:31:24 PM): I'm fake now?
brokenneedle25 (11:33:05 PM): u did some snake shit nukno that
LyricalVisionary (11:31:54 PM): I spoke some real shit
LyricalVisionary (11:31:58 PM): Believe it or not
LyricalVisionary (11:32:03 PM): I told dudes I had no beef witcha
brokenneedle25 (11:33:21 PM): I know ma' flow is off
brokenneedle25 (11:33:30 PM): no worrieson that
LyricalVisionary (11:32:15 PM): Your flow off? There is no flow period
brokenneedle25 (11:33:41 PM): aight thereu go
LyricalVisionary (11:32:35 PM): Dude, I told you this the moment you sent me ya acapella
LyricalVisionary (11:32:51 PM): I told you I had to dig into ya verse and give you flow virtually
brokenneedle25 (11:34:24 PM): I kno
brokenneedle25 (11:34:29 PM): but thaz b4
LyricalVisionary (11:33:13 PM): so I'm fake now?
brokenneedle25 (11:34:32 PM): and thisnow
LyricalVisionary (11:33:21 PM): I'm the same dude
brokenneedle25 (11:34:42 PM): u shudn'thave said them lines then
brokenneedle25 (11:34:52 PM): I wasntgnasay shit 2 u
LyricalVisionary (11:33:37 PM): It's real talk
LyricalVisionary (11:33:43 PM): You know it
LyricalVisionary (11:33:47 PM): I hold nuthin back
brokenneedle25 (11:35:06 PM): I wasgonna point out in the beggingizonly meant 4 Ses
LyricalVisionary (11:34:19 PM): Well, shit escalated
brokenneedle25 (11:35:40 PM): eveninthelyrics I say Fuck you dj ses nothiong meant2 u
brokenneedle25 (11:35:49 PM): nothing*
LyricalVisionary (11:34:34 PM): Yeah, but the reply you put to me
LyricalVisionary (11:34:45 PM): I won't be recovering from that injury?
LyricalVisionary (11:34:56 PM): It's more like I won't be recovering from that laughter
brokenneedle25 (11:36:20 PM): u made linesin ya diss 2 me man
LyricalVisionary (11:35:05 PM): Dude, that was the most pitiful battle track I ever heard
LyricalVisionary (11:35:13 PM): Yeah, and them lines was real talk
brokenneedle25 (11:36:33 PM): I wasnt tryign 2make itgood
LyricalVisionary (11:35:19 PM): Cuz dude said you had an ill flow
LyricalVisionary (11:35:32 PM): So I put it out there in the open that you got shit but dick riders
brokenneedle25 (11:36:57 PM): I was sayingthatshit 2 b pretending 2 b like Ses n KillBill
brokenneedle25 (11:37:15 PM): I kno I dont got aflow onthat shit
LyricalVisionary (11:36:09 PM): that's the thing though, just cuz I'm puttin the truth out there, I'm fake now?
LyricalVisionary (11:36:12 PM): It's game over?
LyricalVisionary (11:36:15 PM): I can barely talk?
LyricalVisionary (11:36:21 PM): In denial?
LyricalVisionary (11:36:22 PM): Dude
LyricalVisionary (11:36:32 PM): I got more flow than any of you dudes combined
LyricalVisionary (11:36:38 PM): I got more lyrical skill than anyone on NG
LyricalVisionary (11:36:47 PM): I got punchlines that'll leave the sharpest n***a guessing
brokenneedle25 (11:38:05 PM): now u being fullo yaself man
LyricalVisionary (11:37:02 PM): That's me talking to you without an ego
brokenneedle25 (11:38:22 PM): if it leave 'em guessing then iz not good hope u kno
LyricalVisionary (11:37:17 PM): If it leave's guessing is a bad look?
LyricalVisionary (11:37:40 PM): That shows you're an idiot, cuz if you leave a sharp n***a guessing what the fuck you meant with a punchline, that shows how witty you could be lyrically
brokenneedle25 (11:39:02 PM): if u dont get the PL n gotta sit theren figue itoutnlikeamath problem then iz not good
LyricalVisionary (11:38:09 PM): That's for n***as who need shit dumbed down for them
brokenneedle25 (11:39:40 PM): thazmost of the hip hop audience foo'
brokenneedle25 (11:39:46 PM): I got shitlike that 2
brokenneedle25 (11:39:54 PM): I dont putit up cuzIthink o ma' audience
LyricalVisionary (11:38:36 PM): What's your illest punchline?
brokenneedle25 (11:40:04 PM): no rocketscientist blistening 2 rap
LyricalVisionary (11:38:51 PM): lmao
LyricalVisionary (11:38:57 PM): Your audience is NG
LyricalVisionary (11:39:08 PM): Dudes ain't stupid here
brokenneedle25 (11:40:38 PM): alot are
LyricalVisionary (11:39:27 PM): That's cuz the n***as you talk to
brokenneedle25 (11:40:48 PM): and I got ppl on myspace and onthestreets
LyricalVisionary (11:39:33 PM): lmao
LyricalVisionary (11:39:37 PM): I doubt on the streets
LyricalVisionary (11:39:45 PM): Cuz dudes will tell you if you got no flow
LyricalVisionary (11:39:53 PM): Lemme guess, you're from East Side BK, right?
brokenneedle25 (11:41:11 PM): iz freestyles
brokenneedle25 (11:41:18 PM): dun needmuch ofa flow 4that
LyricalVisionary (11:40:04 PM): Yeah, you do
brokenneedle25 (11:41:28 PM): not 2 much of 1
LyricalVisionary (11:40:13 PM): You know nothing of stanzas
LyricalVisionary (11:40:23 PM): After all that shit I told you before, you forgot it all
LyricalVisionary (11:40:27 PM): You're washed up
LyricalVisionary (11:40:29 PM): lmao
brokenneedle25 (11:41:55 PM): I been smoking weed all summer, Ibeen retired
brokenneedle25 (11:42:01 PM): I'm relearningeverything
LyricalVisionary (11:40:46 PM): Dun use that shit as an excuse dude
brokenneedle25 (11:42:14 PM): I'm 4real tho
LyricalVisionary (11:40:56 PM): That shit do nothing but make you hungry and lazy
LyricalVisionary (11:41:11 PM): I got freestyles recorded of me being high
brokenneedle25 (11:42:30 PM): at 1 point I fuckin forgot where to end aline
brokenneedle25 (11:42:36 PM): I kno
LyricalVisionary (11:41:19 PM): and you know what? I still got flow my n***a
LyricalVisionary (11:41:23 PM): for 30 minutes straight
brokenneedle25 (11:42:42 PM): but thazcuzu focus on rap
brokenneedle25 (11:42:45 PM): ibeen retired
brokenneedle25 (11:42:51 PM): I havent recorded shitin madd long
LyricalVisionary (11:41:39 PM): DUDE! You never started! How can you be retired?
LyricalVisionary (11:41:44 PM): You never had flow!
LyricalVisionary (11:41:59 PM): I was better than you at the age of 12 in rapping than you was at your prime
brokenneedle25 (11:43:26 PM): I never hada prime
LyricalVisionary (11:42:14 PM): I could've told you that
brokenneedle25 (11:43:33 PM): I stoped rapping 4 a while
brokenneedle25 (11:43:37 PM): inever saidI had flow
brokenneedle25 (11:43:48 PM): I just forgot all theshitI learned
LyricalVisionary (11:42:31 PM): If you don't have flow, why not just stop period then?
brokenneedle25 (11:43:53 PM): nowI'm re-learning it
LyricalVisionary (11:42:38 PM): How you forget flow?
brokenneedle25 (11:44:02 PM): Ineverforgot it
brokenneedle25 (11:44:06 PM): cuz Inever learned it
LyricalVisionary (11:42:54 PM): Flow isn't something you learn.
LyricalVisionary (11:42:58 PM): It's something that grows on you.
brokenneedle25 (11:44:20 PM): ye i kno
LyricalVisionary (11:43:06 PM): No you don't
brokenneedle25 (11:44:27 PM): n I have a years of experience
LyricalVisionary (11:43:10 PM): Cuz you still don't have it
LyricalVisionary (11:43:14 PM): lmao
brokenneedle25 (11:44:40 PM): I started rappinglast year
LyricalVisionary (11:43:27 PM): And what, Ses just started freestyling
LyricalVisionary (11:43:32 PM): And he still got more flow than you
LyricalVisionary (11:43:39 PM): You're a cornball
LyricalVisionary (11:43:48 PM): You, Breeze, Seraphic, and Lejin
LyricalVisionary (11:43:51 PM): you dudes are funny
brokenneedle25 (11:45:10 PM): I'm white dawg
LyricalVisionary (11:43:56 PM): LMAO
brokenneedle25 (11:45:16 PM): he gotflow easily
LyricalVisionary (11:43:59 PM): That means something?
LyricalVisionary (11:44:07 PM): Nitemare is white
brokenneedle25 (11:45:25 PM): ye iz harder forme to flow
LyricalVisionary (11:44:08 PM): He has flow
LyricalVisionary (11:44:10 PM): LMAO
brokenneedle25 (11:45:29 PM): notrly
brokenneedle25 (11:45:30 PM): lmao
LyricalVisionary (11:44:18 PM): So it's harder for you to flow cuz you're white?
brokenneedle25 (11:45:38 PM): nitemare dun gotshit
brokenneedle25 (11:45:49 PM): nahiz harderfor meto get agood flow
LyricalVisionary (11:44:36 PM): Cuz you're white?
LyricalVisionary (11:44:38 PM): lmao
brokenneedle25 (11:45:59 PM): ye
LyricalVisionary (11:44:43 PM): LMAO!!!!
LyricalVisionary (11:44:45 PM): OMFG
LyricalVisionary (11:44:46 PM): Dude
brokenneedle25 (11:46:06 PM): have u heard Eminems original shit?
LyricalVisionary (11:44:55 PM): Infinite, of course
brokenneedle25 (11:46:13 PM): he was ass
LyricalVisionary (11:44:58 PM): You know what
LyricalVisionary (11:45:00 PM): He had flow
brokenneedle25 (11:46:29 PM): uheardthe freestyles
LyricalVisionary (11:45:20 PM): Yeah, even recordings
brokenneedle25 (11:46:40 PM): n themixtape o w.e he made2 diss his ex black gf
LyricalVisionary (11:45:22 PM): He had flow
brokenneedle25 (11:46:53 PM): he didnt have good lyricsn not muchof a flow
LyricalVisionary (11:45:45 PM): How can you tell what a flow is if you have none?
brokenneedle25 (11:47:14 PM): cuz I'm learning it
LyricalVisionary (11:46:00 PM): And it doesn't even take much to have flow.
LyricalVisionary (11:46:13 PM): You say the word that rhymes in sync with the snare
LyricalVisionary (11:46:18 PM): What's so hard about that
LyricalVisionary (11:46:25 PM): I was able to do that at the age of 6
LyricalVisionary (11:46:26 PM): lmao
brokenneedle25 (11:47:46 PM): I actually did that
brokenneedle25 (11:47:50 PM): ifu pay attention
brokenneedle25 (11:47:58 PM): listen closely
LyricalVisionary (11:46:43 PM): LMAO
brokenneedle25 (11:48:02 PM): n u'll see
LyricalVisionary (11:46:47 PM): Dude
brokenneedle25 (11:48:10 PM): izbad I kno
LyricalVisionary (11:46:54 PM): ever 6 lines would be off
brokenneedle25 (11:48:19 PM): but thaz cuz I wrotethoselineslong ago
LyricalVisionary (11:47:11 PM): I'm done with you, this is enough proof
LyricalVisionary (11:47:13 PM): lmao
brokenneedle25 (11:48:35 PM): once uguysmake acomeback I'ma write some fresh shit
LyricalVisionary (11:47:22 PM): Dude
LyricalVisionary (11:47:28 PM): My brother was on wet
LyricalVisionary (11:47:29 PM): and weed
LyricalVisionary (11:47:32 PM): still flowing
brokenneedle25 (11:48:52 PM): nowthat I kno what 2do to flow
LyricalVisionary (11:47:37 PM): You never had flow
LyricalVisionary (11:47:40 PM): give up
brokenneedle25 (11:49:03 PM): Inever saidweed fucks ya flow
brokenneedle25 (11:49:10 PM): Inever knewhow 2 flow
LyricalVisionary (11:47:53 PM): yeah, you did
brokenneedle25 (11:49:15 PM): till now
LyricalVisionary (11:48:03 PM): You said you've been smokin too much
LyricalVisionary (11:48:13 PM): lol
brokenneedle25 (11:49:32 PM): no i said Iforgot shit I learned
brokenneedle25 (11:49:36 PM): not flow
LyricalVisionary (11:48:29 PM): That's fucking it up then idiot
LyricalVisionary (11:48:40 PM): get ya train of thought up kid
brokenneedle25 (11:50:04 PM): I'm high now
brokenneedle25 (11:50:05 PM): lmao
LyricalVisionary (11:48:52 PM): That means nothing
brokenneedle25 (11:50:19 PM): means I dno whati just said
brokenneedle25 (11:50:32 PM): soifitdunmake senseit aint ma'; fault
LyricalVisionary (11:49:22 PM): Just remember that you jocking me when I first started out on this site
LyricalVisionary (11:49:28 PM): You was like my #1 fan
brokenneedle25 (11:50:54 PM): yen then u dissme
LyricalVisionary (11:49:37 PM): And now that I say real shit
LyricalVisionary (11:49:42 PM): You get offended
LyricalVisionary (11:49:46 PM): If you know it's true
LyricalVisionary (11:49:49 PM): why take offense?
brokenneedle25 (11:51:24 PM): u dun seeme goin out there n sayin I neverunderstood a word ofwhat u said unless iztyped
brokenneedle25 (11:51:42 PM): Ikeep thatshit 2ma'self
brokenneedle25 (11:51:47 PM): cuz I dun wanna insult u
LyricalVisionary (11:50:31 PM): Dude, only you dudes said you couldn't understand
brokenneedle25 (11:51:52 PM): n whatudid was insultme
LyricalVisionary (11:50:38 PM): Yet a lot of heads understood
LyricalVisionary (11:50:47 PM): You n***as a bunch of acters
brokenneedle25 (11:52:07 PM): if u pay attention u understand
LyricalVisionary (11:50:51 PM): I'm off n***a
LyricalVisionary (11:50:55 PM): Stay up
LyricalVisionary (11:51:00 PM): And be ready for the take over
brokenneedle25 (11:52:20 PM): but untill it has 1000% of ur concentration u cantget shit

Thumbs up bitches. * old picture o.O *

All the proof you need. lmao


Comments

all man how do u learn flow lmao are u fucking serious he's relearning flow he do u forget it...it's somethin that is alwayz in u if u have it u sayin u have more lyrical talent than anyone on NG is funny too mang before u say that look at all my old tracks mang i ain't trippin but damn that wuz cocky that kid ain't never had talent rappin never i just reveiwed and didn't want to hurt the kids feelings i can rap better than that n***a mumbling in my sleep shit do u and remember u dont' kno me but i'mma help u out with this fake ass n***a ya digg

Well, remember fam, I am the rebirth of Pun =D

No offense to you, but you gotta admit if I am not, I am one of the most lyrical dudes on here. My main style is on some ol' Big Pun type shit. And I did check out ya tracks, and I'm really feeling ya shit fam. Main reason I said that shit cuz I figured NDP left NG. This is what really good now. Maybe after this battle, we can test lyrical wits with each other. Take it easy fam.

i have to post another one weed has nothing to do with rapping actually i use to smoke and write or make a beat smoke to get in the zone cuz when yur high u foucus on one thing how in the hell u gonna use smoking as an excuse...i'm high right now.....let me write somethin real quick....

Bn all you talking is ridicule bullshit...
you can't forget flow bitch are u stupid...
give u a lyrical asswhoopin they gon say i'm abusive..
talkin rif raff you'll get clapped so here's the conclusion
yo can't rap can't spit what the fuck are you doin
smoke weed jack off there's you're solution..

i just typed that fast as hell and i'm so high right now i'm on planet of the apes mang the kid is lame ...i wanna expose him tryna use weed as an excuse

That's what is fam. These niggas is done.

o yes ofcourse I use weed as an excuse, I love the interpretations u like to make, I said I'm high so I dno what i'm talkin about, plus ma' memory is out the door, I write n rap shit while high too, I'm high at the moment, I just haven't done this shit in a while, n I kno u gonna respond to this shit wit some re-enterpreting ma' words shit so dun even bother, reminds me of how religion gets started like Christianity over wrong interpretations of the bible, ohh and lemme say it for you "What now u comparing urself 2 da bible?" no that's another interpretation I'm atheist so I dun give a fuck about the books value. Go fuck yaself and Reven u can do alike u ancient dinasour riding bitch

u kno what broken needle shut the fuck up u don't even kno what chu talkin bout i'm really not gonna get mad about this all yur doing is tryna piss me on ain't no one dick rydin but u k just shut up bruh go to hell with gasoline drawers on bitch ass n***a u couldn't touch with a flagpole even if u wanted to and i never compared myself to anything u not even worth rappin for u suck u'll never have a rap career so just be quiet keep talkin homeboi u got a mouth for a reason but one thing stop tryna pose like u somethin great i eat rappers like u all day for breakfast lunch and dinner then at the end of the day i push all the bullshit out and start a new day fresh and not crammed with bullshit :D....anyway i say what i feel and u feel what i say i say what i mean and i mean that u cake...bruh u softer than on oven baked cookie let me go to the store and buy u some tampons cuz u already startin to bleed from the words that i spit and plz stop yur garbage u were on my dick and formely N.D.P's dick so stop and then u talk about me so let me put it like this...stop ridin other ppls dick before u get AIDS int he asshole muthafucker...u not even worth my time i'm a giant to yur bitch ass....~1~