war-spawn's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[HW - The Crimson Touch]

Uhmm....

The drums are a badass sample warspawn uses when he's out of drum ideas and is lazy :3

haywirehaywire responds:

true that.

[Retarded beef(diss)]

Uhmm....

Why are you attempting to rap? You still have no flow, no delivery, and you still hesitate when you try to enunciate. You're also off beat, kthnx.

Broken-Needle responds:

ya moms asked me 2 keep rappin, I'm jus doing her a favor n making her proud so u dun have 2

[Freestyle rap!]

I repeat myself too much

I also use the N-word too much. BAD QUALITY IS GREAT QUALITY lol

[-DZK- Wu Flix]

Jesus....

How the fuck did you manage to get Canibus on this? Jesus god this shit is raw as fuck.

[[C] Mean Music]

On the wall like sticky boogers...

You've taken lyricism to a new height man. GG.

[Westnyle Old School Promo]

Definitely a hit...

But not out of the ballpark. Your flow is on point, for sure about that. But it sounds like you need to enunciate a bit more for it to stand out. Not only that, the bass of the beat overpowers your vocals heavy, then it kinda distorts a bit and it becomes a little more difficult to hear you at certain parts. Keep going at it though, you have a shit load of potential my nig.

[[K-Lo] Ode To Nazi Zombies]

Hmm....

You melodies are on point, but you need to use more compression. Your sound levels are jumping everywhere. Not only that, try to see if you could get a soundfont or something to replace that piano. The ones you used here sounds like FL Keys, and those tend to clip HORRIBLY. Also, try to see if you can put some diversity within your drums. It's just the same loop going over and over, with no break.

[TB - Worst Way(Watch Me)]

Oh hay, FuzzyCub...

If you knew how to read correctly, which I'm assuming you don't, let ME be the one to explain this to you.

The beat itself isn't of Monk's (the first rapper on this song) making. As you can clearly see in the Author's Comments, it says :

Produced By: Who Knows? It was a beat I found from rome-lherison but he stole it.

Which means we don't know who made the beat. Thank you for clarifying where the sample is from. But as far as you voting a one, I feel it's a bit harsh because you don't give criticism in way or form. Next time, at least be constructive instead of being a douche.

MC-Q responds:

Thats right Pops you tell em
illiterate fucks haha
BTW...Did U just call me fuzzy cub?

[ChurchBoiz daddy dead for good]

This is when I get to be an ass....

YOU ARE DEAD

YOU ARE DEAD

YOU ARE DEAD

So that's how it feels like... GOD IT'S SO GOOD! TOTALLY SAFE TO WALK OUTSIDE NOW AMG

I guess Mr. Big Bad popped his last pain pill :3

[Yun+WS - In Your Veins]

This is it Yun...

Finally a song so good that you'll hate so much because it's going to make you well known. Should've had me post it, but bleh. More likely for downvotes.