Dude....
Seriously, you could ask Nitemare. I couldn't even pay attention to his verse cuz this beat is so vibrant. You most definately got my 5/5, 10/10, and a favorite. Writting to this song truely was an honor, and it allowed me to relive the past in lyrics. Props bruh.
Provoke your fans?
The hook sounds off at points. And that's most of the track. I also find it funny on how all ya fans are just new accounts, and how they ride ya dick quick as hell. I even believe you being on Lucrazer saying how Nitemare is ya bitch. Lucrazer hasn't posted shit, and he sure as hell does type like you. Also, stop being a hypocrite. Before you was saying mad shit on how he ain't on ya level, and this ain't even a battle. Next thing you know, you putting out more tracks than he did you. You's a real shady character bruh...
wow if it isnt the great mouthfull of CUM rappa!!! Hey how u bin dipshit?!?!? XD lol i hear people telling me you trying to copy my Style now hahaha. Awww thats so sweet your trying to be like me ^_^
Jesus christ...
This made me wet myself =x
well that wasn't on our agenda of things we wanted to inflict on listeners, but we're going to have to add it now :D!
Thank you for the review, we're glad you liked it!
A pretty decent track.
And I can already tell this wasn't a freestyle. Though a lot of the shit on here ain't true, it does flow well. You really can't murder a person's career over the internet. Just never could happen. Same shit with him. He my boy and all, but that shit dun work like that. You do have Ses on ya mind a lot though, I'll admit that much. Quick question though, out of all seriousness.... What made you start rapping? I know Ses was making beats, you wanted a collab. I really can't say much cuz I wasn't there, but I remember you saying something about how you dun rap, and you wanna just beat battle. Do you think about him that much that you felt you had to write something to proove a point? I'm not dissin in anyway, cuz this track is pretty ill. I just wanna know what the hell is going through your mind. It's like whatever Ses does, you follow up soon after. You dun like him, you still use his tag he made for you. He wanted you to freestyle against him, you refused, but then here I see you putting up verses now. You thinking about rapping on some permanent shit, or is this just a one time thing? Cuz this shit has a lot of potential. You really got me puzzled bruh.
Either way, I gave a 4/5. (3.87 / 5.00 (+ 0.0039)) And a 7/10. Get back at me.
Could never get old...
You really getting remixing these songs. We might have to do some collabs later.
I'm only remixing bc I can't come up with another song...i'm tryin my hardest though
And if you wanna collab with me (cuz I think the boss wanted us to do so anyways lol) PM me, IM me...somethin..but just hit me up. ^_^v
This shit is nice.
This shit has a great rhythm. No complaints really. I love the way how all the guitars and synths blend together perfectly. The drum line is a little simplistic, but really isn't needed with as much melodies as you used. Effing great stuff here. *thumbs up*
Thx fam! The drumline was pretty simple...but a couple reasons why...
1. Couldn't think of another beat at the time.
2. It sounded hot as I ws making it.
3. There is no 3. (hahaha)
Thx for the 10 though! ^_^v
I fucking love this shit...
Dude, those synths are so ill. I think I just wet myself due to how much I love em. Keep the shit up bruh, you'll be making it big in no time.
Yeeeahhhhhhhhhh. Hopefully ill make it big, i mean thats what im going for.
If i dont make it its fine, i enjoy making music.
Greekta
Real talk...
If you choose to battle someone of Ses' caliber with flows, atleast have flow. I told you before bruh, rock with the beat, dun talk on it. You really have no good punchlines. And speaking of GPS', atleast he can keep up with it. You're all off.
Seraphic's verse... sounds like the Beastie Boy who never was.
Lejin, lmao. I sound muffled? Wouldn't bust a grape in a food fight? BN got no flow, and Breeze is a biting ass n***a. Real recognize real? Ya dudes looking real unfamiliar right about now.
ye cuz ain't real sho shut ya mouth so that shit can heal up properly son, wouldn't be talkin shit right now cuz u can barely talk, u in denial son, iz Game Over and u ran out of quaters to continue so shut ya mouth and quit 0 bombing the track,
BN out
Pretty good...
I'd tone down a couple of things, just so everything would be balanced out. Other than that, this track is pretty sick. Props.
Yeah, this was a toughie when it came to balancing. Thanks for the props!
O.o
Truly inspiring work... Thumbs up.
circa 2006
Age 34, Male
Freelance Musician
Paterson, NJ
Joined on 4/23/06
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