war-spawn's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[HW - Back In The Days]

oooo

Definitely a great song. Added to mah fav's.

haywirehaywire responds:

thanks man, glad you liked it. i pretty much like every single song you have on newgrounds so i guess its good that you like this

[[S:C] Gigantic Pentameter]

You're in the right path so far...

The only thing that could be said that this one that others haven't said in the line of constructive criticism: Make your snare a tad bit more powerful. If you can, try to see if you could get an actual drum hit, and compress it with a slight bit of reverb. There, you should be able to have a heavier sounding drumline.

You have your entire layout down fine for a hip-hop track, so there isn't really any purpose to have 'more transition' if you intend of having an MC on this. The problem with more transition is that it may over power the MC and most people might focus on the beat more than anything.

As far as this track goes, I give a solid 10/10 for the simple fact that everything is on point for an MC to rap on this. The 'shallow strings' as Nomader pointed out aren't shallow at all. If this was to be a classical track, then I would agree with him. But since there's more to this than just strings, you can't really have your strings overpower every other instrument on here.

Kudos to you on this work of art.

REMINDER : FIX THE SNARE =P

SymbolCymbal responds:

YEAH THE FUCKIN SNARE..
It was one of those things that kinda just sticks in the back of your head.. i was so concerned with just making sure the ambience was completely fulfilled i completely ignored that this is a beat oriented song.. i remember mixing it and raising the levels of the drum patterns. I didnt think they were enough..I always focus on the bass drum more than the snare.. im in a band and to jam with a bassist mean you have to give him solid bass drum... So yeah bass drum is stuck inside my personality as a musician.........
i tried old school for the first time on this one so i think i did OK..

But yeah .. the snare definitely needs to have more presence. it doesn't crack through the rhythm like an old-school song should..

The shallow string that nomader pointed out i have been working on... the only problem is i would have to put samples there instead of what i wrote.. i dont think im ready to go into the world of samples/... unless im getting paid! LOL....

I want to thank you for noticing the effort and work put into the simplicity that is this track ....

.............WOW you called it art.. so ... im ... like.... an artist? SWEEEEEEEET! HAHA

AWESOME REVIEW

[GSG - Violet Monk Sunglasses]

Pretty fly...

Lets just hope your score keeps up so then you could get best of teh week :D

GunstarGreene responds:

That means a lot, thanks man.

[[MS] - BusinessRMX]

Despite the 0 bomb

This beat is pretty fucking raw. I'm pretty sure if you were to post the instrumental alone, you wouldn't have gotten zeroed :C

If it comes down to it, lemme be on the re-remix :P

Macsalad responds:

will do!
thanks!

[DZK - Super-Zeroes]

haha

Kinda ironic that dudes 0'd the shit outta this. This shit made me laugh. You definitely need to hit me up on AIM some time nig.

WarLab responds:

Sure thing man, Im Glad you like the song

[Oasis in the Desert]

Fresh...

This beat is almost perfect, just that the piano's levels seem a bit too high. This also me sounding sophisticated. :D

Also, penis. GREAT WORK YA?!

CrimzonWolf777 responds:

well now that i know your sophisticatedness xD
anyways...now that i hear it, it is a bit too high. oh wells.

Also, testicles. That is all LOL ^_^v

[Loud and Clear [7000]]

oh dear god

I nearly nutted myself as soon as the beat dropped in. Definitely throwing this one up on my favs. And also downloading.

Sirhc7000 responds:

lol i guess i appreciate ur near premature ejaculation lol (no homo) haha. Thx for the review spawn...NG did me dirty on the score tho...

its all good tho.

[Hip-hop Mashup]

Uh...

1. None of your this is your original work, so this is against the TOS.

2. You didn't even use an acapella. So both the instrumentals are just clashing to make a horrible sound.

3. You got the timing on point, so I give you that much.

You get a 2/10.

HardStyle223 responds:

lol everyone on newgrounds goes mad hard :(

and i didnt wanna do just vocals for a reason.

[Wyze - Penance]

Hmm...

The vocals are on point, but you have the same problem I have with many of my songs... Just sound so pissed off, lol. The beat itself has great compistion, I just don't like the actual instruments used. (YEAH, YOU READ IT RIGHT IG!!)

But yeah, overall, I give it a 9 :3

Blasphem-E responds:

O SNAPS! SPAWN JUST SAID SOME SHIT TO IG! PASS IT AROUND!!! lol. Thanks for the review man, ya, I feel ya on the angry thing. It's hard to be loud and full volme and not sound angry