Hmmm...
The main melody is tight. The synthie bass sound that comes in every now and then is a good addition as well. Maybe if you try adding some tubular bells in the background, just following up with the bass'd sound, it'll do good. Also, try using a different snare/clap, preferably something with more reverb. And hi-hats would also make this song a lot better. I hope to hear a finished version from ya.