BUAHAHAHAH
Hmmm.... I'm running low on samples.... Oh, what's this? Nice piano melody... Oh hey, I wonder if I could flip this... I'll just download this bugger here, and Crim will never know it's me. =D
Buahahahahah
Great piece man. I won't ruining it by putting my hip-hop nonsense with it xD
Lol runnin low on samples, huh? if you do use a sample from this song, then flip it with somethin epic, i'd prolly flip out in awe xD
So of course...
I diss Breeze first, that makes him a white kid indeed. I dissed you before I dropped 2 lines at BN, that definately means I'm picking on him. Btw, I got the chat saved from yesterday, unedited. You're the only one blocking people, I just wanted to keep working on my collab with Yun. I don't even have to respond to your corny ass tracks cuz I said more in Dance With Da Devil than you did in all of ya tracks.
BTW, stop editin my voice to make it sound like that. Throwing mad bass in there to muffle it up. You're a poser, I ain't give my address cuz I ain't feel it was neccesary fightin you infront of my family. HENCE, why I told you to meet me on Paterson Ave and Union Ave. I stood out there for 45 minutes after you said you'd be there cuz you was in the area, I even had a boombox playing the diss track out loud on repeat. Did Big Bad Lejin ever show? Nope. And since ya dumb ass blocked me from ya page, this is the only place where I can get 3 minutes of typing at. Fucking hypocrite, lmfao. Great work on the track, you're definately making places with your low ass scores. Hah.
Stop hiding and come out side mumbleface. Im not Bn im not Dj Limited im not Seraphic. Ill smash your mumbling keyboard gangster mouth down your you fucking throat you epic nerd lets pop some shit ill keep killing you again and again like i did ses, i ust put you on your ass mumbling BITCH.
<<BANG>>KO!!
Take me off block mr clean. Your going nowhere stuck on NG begging social outcasts for emotional support and begging for nerds to drop zeroes but only the best artists get the lowest scores.
psssst~ uits all envy... look it up you epic nerd. I love avril i fucked her in the ass helped her hit them high notes oooooh GYEAH!!
Your final blow tickled me last year just before i ENDED you looool
"Theres multiple reasons" HAHAHAHAahahahahahaha
Ooooh shit
Where the fuck you come out with the idea for this one? This shit had me laughing at midget line, cuz at that point I got what the track was about. Started reading the lyrics, and just kept laughing. Props.
Dunno wtf dude below me talking bout...
But this shit sounds sick as hell. Wicked ass sample you used here. Great work flippin it.
Oh, the collabing region has gone so far :3
I have Yun, you have Helix, Zajed has K-Dm. THE DUO'S MUST PREVAIL!
I'm feelin this track, nice and calm. Doesn't get too tiring, and it keeps me listening. Sounds real professional. Keep up the good work guys.
lol, I never noticed that but you have a point about the duos on NG. Anyways thanks for the review, it means a lot coming from a producer of your level, haha.
Hmm....
Shit just sounds crazy. Keep teh good shits up good sir.
Eh...
Beat is hot as shit. I already know you didn't ask the dude who made it to use it. I voted 3 cuz of the beat. Don't get to happy, your songs still sound all the same.
Rap about something new... oh wait, we're the highlight of your life. Heh...
Current Score
2.59 / 5.00 (+ 0.061)
Im the highlight of your life wow how could i forget hahah thanks mumbles you just cant stop thinking about me can you? XD
Dont get carried away now your beats still are stolen and your still sucking some other nerd boy dick on vent. taste good mumbles?
Warspawn: flut flegin!! flut flegiiiiiiin!!!!!
Lejin: lol? XD
((please dont steal this beat ok mumbles? youve stolen enough already. and im having alot of fun pushing you right noow cause theres just soooooo much i want people to know about u. but i need your epic nerd ass to give me the reason hahahahahahaahah say SOMETHING MUMBLES, SAY IT!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAH
Once again...
'twas a pleasure working with ya.
I respect the message.
The lyrics to this are well put together. But as far as your delivery goes, its kinda off. Sounds like your moving back and forth from the mic, which makes some words hard to understand. And it sounds like you put too much adlibs, which doesn't fit the mood of the track. Also, that beat is fucking amazing in my honest opinion. I feel that it should get more attention, and just lower your vocals about 2dbs just to set more of a melodic mood. Either way, good job song. Keep it up.
Hm...
A very awkward sample. The beginning part where it looped sounds like it was poorly put together. Touch that up a bit, and I'm sure you'll get the sound ya want. Now, when the actualy beat drops, it sounds like it's just a beat drop in general, but then just loops itself. If you used the melody in the very beginning after 4 or 8 bars, would've been perfect. Then the stalling part that's at 1:13 feels overdone. Putting that at like 2 or 4 bars would've been good. I also noticed you added some melodizers in the back once the beat comes back in, which does give it some kind of transition, which is always good. But once the way it changes up at 2:16, I felt that part just needs to be removed completely. Doesn't really fit the mood, just kinda destroys anything that was there. Then you brought it back in, but with the same stuff that was there earlier, which is good as a filler. Also, your fade out is too long, and feels kinda bland. Have a steady fade out, which usually anywhere between 10 to 15 seconds. I hope this review helped ya, because this is a pretty fuckin nice sample.
ey thx a lot for this review war-spawn. This really helps a lot.
Like seriously dogg this is a good ass review, you put in a crapload of detail and really listened to the beat and analyzed it. I agreed with some of your points on the beat and BELIEVE ME, I tried to make the beat as steady as possible but I cant quantize (reason 4.0) and for some reason no matter how accurate I try to be it always comes out kind of...jagged i guess?
And on the other things about the beat break and the main melody I also agree with you b/c i admit when i was making this beat i was really tired at a certain point and just looped it and just added random things. I feel like if this was actually rapped on maybe it will be a little more appreiciated. \
Once again thx 4 tha review. BTW I really admire your style in producing. Yo shit iz hella tite sonn. matta fact ima go check sum of ur stuff now.
circa 2006
Age 35, Male
Freelance Musician
Paterson, NJ
Joined on 4/23/06
Savior in the Sky {piano} 
