war-spawn's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[KTR hip hoppin]

ooo, piirty...

Are you looking for a lyricist in general, or need help with lyric advice? Pm me if anything o.O

[Shun-the-Sun - Migraine]

woot!

I have a headache! And I love it! O.o

Shun-the-Sun responds:

hey thanks. you sound like a gamer. ironically enough i used a shortened version of this song in a Unreal Tournament level i made.

[Hataz dis 4 u]

...

I'm really wondering how you got all ya fans. I'm suspecting that none of the listen to real hip-hop. Dude, as I told you before, and this is some real live shit, you need flow. You're just talking on the beat, not even rapping. And I dunno who's been downvoting ya tracks and all, but I'm sure it's people who know what hip-hop actually is. You need to be nice before someone actually hates. Real talk fam.

Broken-Needle responds:

Dawg this shit is half a year old, and I just listened 2 dat shit u put up earlier, u did some snake shit homie, and I'm about to actually put up the track just cuz u put that shit up, and show u how toflow son, shouldn't have said shit and kept ya broken jaw shut this ain't thru the wire where iz ok to sound like u just got rocked, o n no1s been voting me down at all, ma' scores are and have been the same for a while cuz I haven't released new shit,
BN out

[Oh My God!!]

Damn.....

Yeah... dude hates hard as hell...

CaliberTheButcher responds:

hell yeah i know

[Lambda Core]

Yo...

This some ill type shit here... Only thing I would change is the snare, it's too low, and sounds like an FL default >.<

Other than that, good effing work. I 5'd ya kid. Stay up.

[evil nigtmare's]

Indeed the wrong genre...

But still a good song =D

[driving with jesus on the side]

Heheh....

I ain't mad at this track... pretty good. Go head, you got access to my beats. =D

[Lejin - Why you mad Billy]

Critique

The beat was way more catchy, but didn't feel like something to battle someone. Overall, you had a better rhyme scheme, ya only downfall is that he used a couple of words twice. If you were to be more consistent, and put more effort into this verse, you could've won this battle. You had the potential to, just that just didn't take the amount of time to perfect and extend the track. I give a 7/10.

Lejin responds:

What battle? He's not even on Lejin's Level of skill. This was merely a swift response that took no longer than 2 minutes. On top of all that this had no effort in it so you can clearly see how bad Billy was annihilated. Lejin clearly is un matched by such a obselete rapper like billy. Good call on the unused potential. You just noticed that Lejin was playing around yet still it sounded much more aggressive than billy's remastered full fledge effort assault which came up short.

[- Here With Me -]

This shit really is calming...

Good to see that you're expanding your style. Good first attempt as well, better than my first sample, that's for damn sure. I'll see if we get a collab soon with some samples. Till then, take it easy kid.

Greeksta-69 responds:

Yeah man its about time i tried to sample something lol.
I made this for someone special.

Yeah, collab sometime man.

Greeksta

[Blinded by the Abyss]

Eah... it's decent.

It's a good attempt, but still a it off. Real simplistic, and all the default FL sounds, just nothing too much.

3/5
4.05 / 5.00 (- 0.34)