war-spawn's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lejin - Churchboy Wangstah]

At first you like his sorta style...

And now it's on some beef shit saying he whack as hell. Instrumental dun even feel like a battle track type beat, and we actually put out work instead of fucking with chump ass NG beef. I'm producing 3 albums right now in Paterson, so why should I bother with you dudes who are too scared to even show your faces? It's pretty damn funny cuz you put out so much tracks to me, yet you didn't counter not ONE thing I said in Dance With Tha Devil. You got nothing on me bruh, keep posting up on NG while I post on the block. Stay up fam.

[X - Kal - Sister Mercury]

It's aight...

But it doesn't feel like a diss track. You mostly talkin bout yaself Kal. lmao @ the punchline you said 0:55, but after that, ya adlibs overlapped ya voice, so it was hard to understand.

4/5
Current Score

2.81 / 5.00 (+ 0.12)

Lejin responds:

lmfao get off our dick you can never be like us no matter how hard you try. You died out mumbleface XD

[R.M.P. - RMP Speaks]

Great track....

The punchlines in this is crazy as fuck. Favorite line: "I'll bust a nut in your mother's mouth in a food fight." So much for bustin a grape, we bust nuts on ya family's sluts, so I guess you can call us a group of nutcases. Crazy how before Lucrazer was leaving positive feedback about ya freestyles before Ses, and now he's talking shit. *coughLejincough*

And yeah, I feel 187 about equalizing it. Some words are too low, like on the hook. Phade did his thing dropping them hard metaphors, and Caliber brought the realness to something already real, so you know how real RMP gets. Big ups.

[_Gunpoint_]

Pretty tight...

I'm not mad at this at all... Good melody, and great rhythm to it. Choice of instruments could've been selected more wisely, but it's all good. Keep it up bro. ^.^

[Aw Snap, Introduction]

Pretty ill...

This shit has a lot of potential to it for a lyrical approach. Only thing I would probably change if it was my track is the volume of the kick, that shit hits a little bit too hard. Other than that, this shit is pretty god dayum good. I'm awaiting the lyrics, be easy fam.

InGenius responds:

I'll retrack it for the finished prduct then. As for lyrics, I promise another set of staccatto lyrics, maybe some alliteration. I'm playing around with that right now too.

Peace

[mainstream music feat warspawn]

Ill message...

This is the sorta hip-hop I'd listen to on any given day. Fuck what Kaliba says, this track actually has meaning. I love the lyrics, and how you didn't make your lyrics too loud either. Big ups... This is going on my favorites...

[Mario Dungen Theme Revisited]

Hmm...

Overall a good. Most parts flowed decent, but there were parts where you forced words in, messing up the flow of the song.

Current Score

4.21 / 5.00 (- 0.11)

[~My girl~]

Eh...

The starting melody sounds too much like Killa Hills 10234 by GZA. Then everything else is just off. Good thing you realize that this isn't the best you done, I hope to hear better shit from you in the future.

[{CW} Dancing Angel]

Great vibe.

Everything is just so mellow... I <3 it. Great work. =D

CrimzonWolf777 responds:

See? I told you you'll end up liking trance once you hear it! hahaha! glad you love it! ^_^v

[Diss Class 101]

Diss class is now in session...

Lejin and BN could take a couple of courses.

I'm feeling this track, simple, yet effective. Props.