war-spawn's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[intro japanese style]

Pretty ill...

I'm feeling this style. The twirps aren't that annoying, just lowering them a bit would do it justice it though. I tried to bring the score up, wasn't much. Just +.30 ;.;

gray1 responds:

yo thanks bro i thought it was cool too

[Lejin - Its over Mosy(Ft.LDope]

lmao

Why ya boy sound like he trynna wake up anyone when he flowing? You do realize that you dissed him too talking about mic quality.

Let everyone know who helped you get your quality Lej. Let em know bout that Line 6 tone port I showed ya.

Ses ain't steal any of BN's lines. I did a lil background check while I was in school. Word play isn't even close.

You dudes is real fucking funny. I'm waiting to see what other comedic track you gonna put out next.

Also, I ain't even vote on this shit. Dumb ass. lmao

[Twilight-Dreaming (Remix)]

Hmm...

This track sounds pretty damn professional. Only thing that I would change myself is the whole drumline's sound. Same rhythm, different sounds basically.

The way that the melodies of the piano and the guitar complement each other so well. it makes it seem that each is at ease with each other being there. Not a lot of the time guitars and pianos with only but a similar melody go well with each other, you played it off well here.

As for the synths in the beginning, I feel that you should've incorporated it more to the song. Cuz you only did put it within the beginning and the end of the track, you really don't get to feel it's presence as much. It really does sound good within the mix.

Overall, I give this track a 9/10. It has a great feel to it, and is overall worth the listen. Good work. ^.^

JakesFable responds:

Yea I did think that the drum beats were a little bad sounding and probly could of been better, But than again im probly getting a drum set for Christmas so when I learn how to play em I can use the beat to this melody and I hope it makes it sound alot better, Thanks alot Very much aprieciated ;)

[Give It 90 Percent]

Jazzy as shit, lmao

This shit got a real good groove to it. The elect. guitar really does this justice using it as a hit. The drumline also goes perfect with the guitar well. The only thing I would advise is changing the piano sound. Sounds too much like the cheap pianos FL provides. It's not as much as it does this track harm, but I just don't like that piano xD. Keep up the good work.

phosphorusprocedure responds:

Yeah, the piano sounds cheap, but it's the best I have right now. Thanks for the review!

[Lejin - FoneyMosie hates me =0]

Fail. Big time...

What happened to "I just want to make music. Stop the beef and the hate" ?

Stop recycling lines. Stop bitings lines as well too. You just bit off BN with the problem/solve it line when ya ripped on YB's beat. You bit of Jay-Z saying "You wouldn't bust a grape in a food fight"

I got 99 problems, but Lejin ain't one. HIT ME!

We're on your mind 24/7. Prove us that we're not. Stop making corny ass tracks towards us. Also, Caliber truely doesn't respect you. But you can keep thinking that he does, we got more of a laugh out of it.

Lejin responds:

only 99? Don't lie to yourself like that you silly stressbag XD Just you wait till your mommy gets old and tired of your waste of food consuming lazy ass hiding in her home. When she gets sick and tired of your mommaz boy ass shes gonna put that ass on the streets. And your gonna end up just like sillybilly... sucking dick for the rest of your life on the street just to eat you bum ass broke like a joke failure of life XD

[AGANG - Welcome to the woods]

Fail....

"I just wanna make music. Quit beefin an hating already..."

Go by ya words n***a. Why you acting like you got something to prove going against us? You not doing anything but making yourself look stupid. And ya boy Nove... he aight, nothing I haven't heard before. Funny how you talked about me mumbling though, while in the background he was singing, while mumbling out his words. That really ain't a good look fam.

Oh, Moses does have a phone. You just don't have the number.

3/5
Current Score

2.60 / 5.00 (+ 0.037)

Just so you could get facts straight, I don't need to downvote you. NG doesn't really like you.

Lejin responds:

lol poorpawn you look mad homeless in your momma basement son. When you gon stop being a mommaz boy hiding in you momma house from the big scary world your afraid to come out and see? with that pronounciation problem i doubt you get very far. you failed at rap, life AND highschool too... so get ready kiddo cause when your mommy leaves your gonna have to get up off that cheap ass radioshack computer and get a fucking job you fucking lazy waste of food LOL! Get ready little boy you gonna be mopping toilets for a living you broke ass bitch XD

[++Classical Vision++ (preview)]

Nice ass melody...

That beginning piano... change the sound of it. Reverb, something! Just so it won't sound so FL Studio like. If you'd like, I could send you some piano sound fonts, them things get the job done. That's the only thing I see wrong with this WIP. Keep up the good work bruh.

djltd responds:

yo man fanks ill take ur advie on board

[Young Breeze - Anthem]

This track is pretty nice...

Though I would expect more bass to be something with this. Along with the horns or something, really all depends. The drum line also could do without the clap, and the snaps. That just makes this feel less hard than what it's intended to be. If you through in some hard type Drumline type shit, and had a crazy ass snare going off in the background, this shit would be fire. Would sound more like an anthem since it'll have the whole band marching feel to it as well.

Vote: 4/5
Current Score

3.99 / 5.00 (+ 0.00071)

YoungBreeze responds:

yea, just might do that.

[AGANG - Straight to the top]

LMAO!!!!

Dude! You still making those kindergarden posts?! HAHAHAH!!!! OMFG! Please do not tell me that YOU actually LOOKED UP gay old strippers just to make fun of Nitemare! XDDDD!!!!!!!! OMFG! Dude! You just proved to me how gay you really are... Oh... god... TRUTH HURTS DUN IT! XDDDD

Seriously, I know you ain't gettin those images from 4Chan or YTMND. Stop looking up gay porn Big Lej... oh dear god... please don't tell me they call you that for a reason! LMFAO!!!! HAHAHAH!!!!!

[Myth or Legend?]

Heheh...

Possibly one of the greatest battle tracks I've heard in a long time. Crazy ass flow. lolol

InGenius responds:

Thanks for the review. Now to move on to bigger and better things.

RIP Beef