Pretty ill...
This shit has a lot of potential to it for a lyrical approach. Only thing I would probably change if it was my track is the volume of the kick, that shit hits a little bit too hard. Other than that, this shit is pretty god dayum good. I'm awaiting the lyrics, be easy fam.
I'll retrack it for the finished prduct then. As for lyrics, I promise another set of staccatto lyrics, maybe some alliteration. I'm playing around with that right now too.
Peace
Great vibe.
Everything is just so mellow... I <3 it. Great work. =D
See? I told you you'll end up liking trance once you hear it! hahaha! glad you love it! ^_^v
Aw, you got my hopes up for nothing...
You mumble more than I do, yet Lejin hoppin on ya dick quick as hell. Ya flow improved, but not by much. And how you give Reven a shout out when you begged him not to diss you? And the illest punchline you had was can't play me like a N-Gage, and that wasn't even all that hot. Dude, we all know you not even in the battle no more, you're no longer a threat, so why even bother?
And Lejin... nice news. Seems that you like to lie as much as I reveal how much of a pussy you are. Stop fronting kid. Also, I showed Wyte what you said about him in my PM you sent me, about how you don't think he's that great. Already gave me the word that he's not fucking with you no more. Stay up fam. Heheh...
ok, now u gottalisten up n open ya ears son cuz if u didnt catch a punchline on like every line then u prolly deaf, I didn't say shit 2 Reven, he asked me how the beef started n I explain n he said fuck itthis beef shit is pointless n said he wont diss me, I didn't even mention his diss in the convo. I'm still in ma' own battle between Ses n Lipz, cuz Lipz choked on his response so i made another diss with no joking around this time. An quit hatin' try n not b full o rage soon as u see thename Lejin.
BN out
Wicked as always...
Great assortment of synths. That bassline is sick as hell, and the choirs dun did em in. Great work. ^.^
RAWR BISHES
Good workin with ya bro. There will be more boredom to come. =D
spartaaaaaaaa
Refreshin ya memory fam.
Kaliba holdin shit down. But as for you Lej, you flipping the story big time. When you first heard me rapping on my tracks, you ain't even know it was me. The reason you said weren't feelin me was cuz I was too "serious" when rapping. I told you I appreciate ya honesty, and I'll take ya critiquing and grow from it. The reason why the beef started between me and you is cuz Billy's first track towards you was better than your first track you put towards him. And that was with a minimal effort when got at him. I told you that you could've had him, you just didn't put ya all into his track. Then you went on saying you dun care what I say, and how you think you the greatest rapper here on NG. I told you that ya pissing me off cuz you acting like a big headed mutha fuckah, and I know lyrically that I'm better than you. And I find it funny how you here kissing Reven's ass and talking shit, hiding behind him. Reven has nothing to do with the situation between me and you. I respect you for your talent, but your ego and ya lies is making you look like a fool to me bruh. I always told you I got nothing to hide, so why you lying about the situation? Stay up n***a.
Wow you really have nothing better to do with that sad lonely life of your but come here and suck our balls eh?!? eh? lmfao you say you respect us but its not like you have a choice mumbleface. We killed you and let breeze roast the left overs. your a has bin and your still upset about that time i told you the truth about you half ass pronounciation problem go get your cruches to support your flow LISTEN TO BREEZE you FUCKING HIP HOP REJECT. You aint shit but a weak ass cum gaggun ass kissing failure. lmfao kid
Real talk...
I ain't a religious dude, and I got a thing against Christianity, but I'm feeling the message of this track. You ain't fell off either, you just in a fucked up state of mind. Just get ya shit straight, get back up on ya feet, and keep pushin foward. I do it all the time my nukka. Stay up primo.
thx man
I'm up on Union Ave, get at me.
You wanna leave empty threats, go head. You wanna recycle lines, fine by me. Remember you not original n***a. You fail at life. You nothing but an audio gangsta. You still saying the same shit over, and over, and over, and over. Get a new routine, ya washed up. Ya life revolves around MMO's and NG. Chump ass n***a, I dare you to come up on Paterson Ave and Union, watch how fast you get fucked up with a machete.
Lmfao whats this are you trying out for 2nd place for keyboard ganster of the year?!?!? XD Machetes looooooooooooooooooool this shit is so funny i fogot to tell my n***as to get scared WAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA!
Gimmie that address you frutin cum gagging faggot gimmie the address watch them boys come in full black wit them red flags wit me up front and a youtube camera crew to watch me fuck your mommazboy ass up on live internet tv for all your little keyboard gansters to watch you faggot.
I'm sorry bro...
I feel that Phade's shit is more relevant to the situation. As I told Breeze, you could use this sorta battle track against anyone. You got a good line in with he just another faded soilder, other than that, you just was at a steady decline in flow. Parts seemed to be off flow for a beat, but you brought it back up. And as for Lejin trynna get at me, it's whatever. I dun pulled more cards than Gambit on him. He got shit on me.
LOL its mumble face in debial part 2 hahaha whats wrong you stupid fuck is it too hot for you? go suck on your faded doldiers strap on u little faggot. hahaha jealous of Breeze your a another joke thats why that n***a killed you after we let him have the left overs of your weak ass. XD
Hahah
Got a good laugh outta it. I ain't gonna front. I still dun think it's as hard as the last line I put at you, 'You quit and came back, believe you ain't Jigga.' I dunno, you really didn't flip any of my lines, and this is good as a normal verse, but for a battle track, it's best left if you just met the dude and ya having a freestyle battle. It's whatever though, I'm not even fucking with you snake ass dudes anymore. You nor Lejin. I'll probably get back up wit BN, dude still got hot ideas, but you and Lejin, some stealing ass fucks.
beat it!
circa 2006
Age 35, Male
Freelance Musician
Paterson, NJ
Joined on 4/23/06
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