Critique
The beat was way more catchy, but didn't feel like something to battle someone. Overall, you had a better rhyme scheme, ya only downfall is that he used a couple of words twice. If you were to be more consistent, and put more effort into this verse, you could've won this battle. You had the potential to, just that just didn't take the amount of time to perfect and extend the track. I give a 7/10.